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So, I was in the tub thinking about how best to progress the story of Carmela and Liina, and I'm starting to wonder if I didn't put enough... Hmm. I'm starting to wonder if I didn't put the cart before the horse again. Carmela's supposed to have the ingrained cynicism, and I'm not sure that really came through. I wanted her close-minded to love, and yet it seems to me she willing lets Liina into her heart.
When I starting writing, I thought this would make Liina seem more special, but now I'm really questioning whether I went too fast again. Maybe I should have a chapter or two before Liina to reinforce her cynicism and attitude toward relationships? Maybe I should have her acting more standoffish to Liina for a while?
I'm just feeling really uncertain of my writing right now. I know what I have is great, but I keep thinking, I could make it better. So, what I'm really wondering is, well, what do you think???
At the very least, I'm going to start working on a prologue for Carmela. Definitely did not reinforce her cynicism.
Please, I could use some feedback!
~Gabby V
More apologies
I've been a little, uh, I dunno, disillusioned with writing lately. Nothing seems to come out right, and all my stories seem like crap. I know, I swore that I'd never go this long without an update, and I'm sorry, but it's been... A weird year.
But logging on to see 1000+ deviation messages and 300+ journals, I figure I'll have to start doing something.
I've also been really disappointed in the lack of feedback I've gotten from the rewrites. Ugh. I don't wanna sound whiny, but it really irritates me. Everyone wanted me to do more and more, but only a handful have given me feedback. How am I supposed to improve if I never know what anyone wa
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Sorry for the inactivity
Busy, busy holidays for me, haha. Moved, and am starting school the sixth. So... It's gonna be busy. Let's see... I have a chapter due to y'all this month. I wanted to do a little Christmas chapter but you know, shit happens. Maybe I'll still write one, but you know, it's not gonna be in time Christmas, obviously.
I'm also a bit disheartened by the lack of response to posting my story back on dA. I thought it might be as popular as it used to be, but it's not even close. Oh well. I mean, I'm not writing for other people anyway, I'm writing for myself. I just wish I had the feedback I used to.
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Just wondering, because I'm addicted to it now.
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Sorry, I know, I'm weird. There has to be at least one out there.
~Gabby V
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Um, if she was standoffih to liina, i think liina would be have been scared off. If Carmela actted distant or unsure, i could see that. If this helps